Student Writing

The students had to substitute and expand the starter sentence to make more descriptive.
Starter sentence. The animal ate the food.

By Logan
The tiny, male, black and white tuxedo kitten slowly gnawed on the little plate of French, vegan, kitty-made cuisine that was set on the floor just for him, in the big, white-marble mansion on a beautiful hillside with an amazing garden in Paris, France.

By Kyler:
The humungous, beautiful, beefy gorilla named Harambe, licked, with it’s whole tongue, on the explosive neonic blue headless turkey who weighed one ton.

By Hunter:

In the jungle of Lamborghinis, where orange trees grew on the ground, a red and black tipped demon, with black wings that watched children, ferociously inhaled one of the many kid’s souls.

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