Student’s paragraphs. Topic sentence : A rat has a hard life.

By Syvawn
A rat has a hard life. If white with red eye rats get into folk’s houses they will try to kill the white with red eye rat using old worn out wooden traps. The traps have tawny, yellow cheese to attract the intruder. People’s vicious, brown, soft, cats will kill the rodent then hide to gobble it down . A mouse has a hard course life.
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by Antonio
A rat has a hard life. It has to eat rotten, apple cores every day of its life. The rat has to live on the muddy street. The rodent gets hit every day by human beings with baseball bats. The rat has a dreadful life.
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Brayden
A furry, white, and warm mouse has a very hard life. Sometimes people trap them in poisonous mousetraps or pick them up by the tail and hit them with a very old tennis racket. They eat very rotten garbage very quickly. Cats chase the furry, white, and warm mouse very swiftly. A cat has a hard life.
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Hunter
A disease caring hairy rat has a hard existence. People try to kill them and trap them. They have to scavenge for food every day in daylight while in danger. They are always in danger from owls, people, and snakes. A disgusting furry rodent has a hard survival.
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By Adrian
A rat has a hard life. Rats have hard life because they have to get food from a garbage can. When rats come in a home, amateurs come to kill them. People who have a lot of rats in their house pick them up by the tail and throw them out of the window. A rat has a hard lifetime.
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Eva
A rat has a hard life. People are always trying to kill them and no-one likes them. They are ugly gross, and not cute at all . Exterminators chase them out of houses ,which is a good thing because you do not want a rat in your house. A rodent has a tough existence.
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By Emma
A rat has a hard life. The mouse has a tough life because nobody likes it, so everyone tries to trap it. The annoying rat was always in people’s garbage cans, and digging in their compost piles.The speedy rodent also had a rough life because people tried to step on him and kill him. The rodent had a difficult existence.
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By Auggie
A rat has a hard life. Rats have hard lives because everyone always tries to kill them. People think rats are ugly creatures. Rats carry diseases so people try to kill them with perfectly good shoes. Rats a hard life.
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Marina
A rat has a hard life. The ugly old rat got chased by a big mean cat who loved big old ugly rats. The rodent has a terrible existence.
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Hayden
A rat has a hard life. The rat is trying to always barely avoid mouse traps all the time.The mortals try to kill it with weapons like baseball bats, rackets, and rat spray. A rodent has a hard existence.

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