Ending to the story!!! From Ms.Milos in Rome, Italy

The whole project can be found under Story Writing project 2015. Ms.Milos grade four class from Rome, Italy will finish off the story for us. Here it is:

A couple of hours later Jenna opened her eyes slowly. Then suddenly she spotted two yellow fiery eyes in the darkness. “Is it Washington or someone else?” she wondered. The doors slammed open. The mysterious outline was approaching through the open doors. A merciless roar broke the silence of the quiet building. She jumped and tried to hide but crushed into the computer. The old squeaky floor cracked under her and she fell into the old basement full of cobwebs and clouds of dust. She struggled to stand up but she felt paws of ice around her neck. She let out a desperate howl when she saw the familiar face.
“You evil traitor! How could you? Now you are on King Genius’s side? You betrayed a childhood of memories!”
“I have always been and will always be your enemy!”Grim hollered.
“Why?! You should protect me! You are my TWIN BROTHER!”
“You say that like you didn’t know! You were always the smarter, the faster, the best between us! I was always in your shadow! Now that I kill you I will become the leader of the pack!”
Without a second thought Jenna sank her white sharp fangs into his throat. Grim bellowed with pain but kept a sturdy grip around her neck. He scraped her face off and blood started dripping down her furry chest. Jenna was losing her breath but she kept fighting for her life. She flipped onto her back because she knew her belly was the most vulnerable part.
The floor started to tremble. The sound of running feet was getting closer and louder. Jenna squinted to make out the figures. Out of nowhere, El Macho stormed in with a howling brave pack of wolves.
“Arriva, arriva!” he yelled with all his might. “We’re here to save you!”
El Macho and Grim exchanged a thundering look. Grim jumped back in fear. He didn’t expect all his enemies to appear. The wolves hesitated. They didn’t know who was right and who deserved to be attacked, Jenna or her twin brother.
“I assure you that Jenna is innocent! Grim wants to become the Alpha leader! He knows that Jenna is the only wolf standing in his way!” El Macho screamed.
“He’s right! I protected the pack against King Genius, not him!” Jenna reminded them with pride.
Agent Washington jumped down from the first floor.
“Grim, I’m at your service! I am your ally!” he admitted.
A fierce battle started between the two sides. Agent Washington had the first move: he vigorously attacked Jenna biting her neck and holding her on the ground with his strong front paws. The wolves charged towards Grim. In the meantime, a member of the pack pushed him and scratched his back leg. Fortunately, Jenna succeeded in getting up and cornered Agent Washington. All of a sudden, she could see him shaking and glowing until she was surrounded by six agents that looked exactly like him. Not knowing what to do, completely bewildered, she tried to back against the wall. As soon as El Macho noticed that Jenna was trapped, he jumped on one of the fake agents crashing on the ground. Shocked, he realized that five of them were holograms. He looked carefully and observed that one of them had a slightly darker fur.
El Macho thought to himself, “That must be the real Agent Washington!”
He yelled at Jenna, “The one in the middle is him!”
Fearless, Jenna sprang towards him and knocked him to the ground. Grim saw the scene and ran to help Agent Washington. That’s when the pack followed Grim and the whole battle got more intense.
In an instant, Grim shook off all the wolves that were enclosing him. Afterwards, the agent hollered with fear: one of the young wolves reached him and bit his shoulder. It was clear that the pack would win.
Jenna petrified Agent Washington but as much as she tried she could not stop Grim. His blood was the same as Jenna’s so she was powerless against him. She then thought of trapping him with her force field: it worked!!!
Finally, the victory was hers: she was now the Alpha leader of Crystal Stone Pack. Nobody cared about her twisted paw but welcomed her as a hero. The only things that counted were loyalty, bravery and sacrifice.

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