Class writing … topic sentence= The path in the jungle was dangerous.

By Owen,
The path in the jungle was dangerous. There were viscious man-eating lions lurking around the path ready to pounce on anything nearby. Poisonous vipers , that are ten feet long, are slithering along the trail read to gobble anything or anyone. Wolverines were hazardously pacing back and forth ready to spring to life and attack. The route in the chaparral was jeopardous.

By Caitlin,
The path in the jungle was dangerous. The evil monkeys with really long tails were stealing all the delicious bananas from the people. The hateful lions wanted the heavenly good lives or else. The unpleasant parrots with bright red eyes were pinching the rodents until they scampered away. The walkway in the forest was risky.

By Mackenzie
The path in the jungle was beautiful. The awesome, weird parrots were singing so perfectly. There are super-duper, pretty trees looking so tall, green and a little strong. The very hairy, bright colourful prince lion , that was so cute and viscious, is just tiredly laying in the hot , red sun. The walkway in the forest was fantastic.

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