Thank you Mrs.Peters for your paragraph. The latest (to see the whole project, click on Story Writing project 2013)
“Wake Up” the man in the seat next to me said. I was about to stand but I saw that Quincy was not beside me anymore. I looked around and under the seats, but he was not there. When I got up, the man was in front of me holding Quincy. As he passed Quincy to me I was going to ask him about the fire, but when I blinked he was gone. I walked up to the conductor and asked, “Have you seen the man that was next to me?” the conductor looked at me and said, “What man? There was never a man sitting next to you.” Then he looked at me as if I was crazy.